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If you're reading that's nice,
and if your reading was nice,
read this next line twice,
leave some feedback,
write a note that will inspire,
bookmark and keep track,
with no replies, I perspire,
cause if you don't you are wack,
you're now a friend I will fire,
and if you're of the family pack,
I'll feel bad . . . and retire.

-B.Lee

(010 - 400) : Come'on people, write a little something so that I know people a reading this stuff. Tell me what you like ... what you dislike ... whatever !!!

The Her

This poem is in the works - :(


Her Voice,
the words,
her speech,
the tone,
Her body,
the curves,
My heart,
it groans,

for motions to slow,
every second take two,
when she sways with flow,
to see our connection through,
Here is some thing to know,
My liking is true,
What might I do, what might I do?

Her warmth,
In feelings,
Her slender,
In figure,
Her words,
The meanings,
Her love,
the trigger,

that sets my heart right,
I keep her in view,
the loveliest sight,
if only you knew,
with a personality bright,
Yes, my liking is true,
What might I do, What might I do?

Her Voice,
the words,
her speech,
the tone,
Her body,
the curves,
My heart,
it groans,

-B.Lee

(009 - 400) : this isn't finished yet, but I think it's enough to constitute for a number on my poem list ... I was actually thinking about trying to make it like a song. I've never done that before so this is the first song type. - wish me luck/post replies to support - yah JERKS !

The Bad Load

Here is what haunts me,
The mass known as laundry,
I got my darks, my lights,
from blacks to whites,
Colors in quantities,
Socks with no pair,
To try and match,
It is'nt fair,
Take an entire batch,
Now, into the dryer,
when it's done and wrinkle free,
sorting and hanging hinder me,
Finished now, how do I bode,
Not good, for I have another load!!!

(008 - 400) : Bah!!! - I've got a ton of laundry to handle... Mountains - CURSE YOU LAUNDRY, DIEEEE !!!

Cup of Life

Morning Concoction,
Fluids so black,
Move with caution,
Because I will attack,
If I have not had,
Some liquid crack,
Don't turn your back,
There's no need to flee,
Don't lose a nerve,
Just serve to me,
A nice large cup,
of delicious hot coffee!

(007 - 400) : The recipe for a good day always includes a cup of some good ole coffee ... Blue Mountain Today - YAR !!! Instant though :(

A Good Morning

On my pillow's neighbor rests her sleeping face,
Capture the moment, it's infinite in its grace,
Sweet mur murs birthed on her waking breath,
As if saying, "It's your love I'm taking next",
Her delicious scent, makes memories in my sheets,
Watching her chest, I calm my heart to match its beats,
As her eyes begin sight, mine are what it meets,
The half of bed I use, she invades with her slender legs,
They lock with mine, and then we nuzzle our fore heads,
Her soft hair, I brush that silk behind her ear,
With feelings dancing, our lips begin to care,
She is delighted and it is I she is adoring,
I am most grateful, this is truly a good morning.

-B.Lee

(006 - 400) : What can I say ... I've had a Good Morning!

Tired Windows of the Mind

I have gotten sleep and the week is almost through,
Wait til Sunday I must, to have another week anew,
This strains my tired eyes, they have had to much to view,
When next I close my eyes, seal the lids with glue,
My eyes are in need of resting, what is there I can do?

-BLee

(005 - 400)

Finally...

Hooray! The window is done,
It has been repaired,
About time, it was only one,
The repair-man was impaired,
Waiting was no fun,
Due to him, I'm grey haired,
But, now it is back to good days in the sun.

(004 - 400) : Geez, took the guy long enough. The actual install did not take more than an hour and 1/2, but waiting for the insulated glass took weeks. How aggravating!! Lets gather our powers and cast a hex on window repair... NO MORE SHINE FOR YOU !!!! - MUHAHHAHAHAHA